Pilar Alessandra – Sydney Screenwriting Seminar

In February 2014, I had the pleasure and privilege of organising and enjoying LA-based screenwriting instructor Pilar Alessandra’s Screenwriting Intensive One Day Seminar – one event in Sydney and one in Melbourne. Pilar was kind enough to give some of her time to an interview with fantastically talented actor, presenter and writer, Kristy Best.

Head on over to Vimeo to check it out. And remember to visit Pilar’s website, http://onthepage.tv for great screenwriting tips, podcasts and courses.


Romancing the Story


Their eyes lock across the crowded room. Inexplicably, they are drawn to each other by some invisible force, a magnetism that no wall of humans can inhibit. Entranced by each other’s company, the bond steadily grows, developing until it blossoms into a ceremony of public declaration of love. A writer meets the one, the story that opens up the mysterious catchment of creativity, dwelling deep in the soul which means that the writer and writing are now one. They are compelled to be together until death parts them.

Over the top? Maybe. But really, if we are not ‘in love’ with writing then how do we convince our audiences to read – or in the case of film, watch, our stories? If our characters aren’t evoking an emotional response in us, then where does that leave our audience? They are sitting in the dark for a couple of hours wondering what else they could have done with their money, and even more importantly, their time. More than likely, it will be: I wonder what I could have watched on VOD tonight instead? Our movies should be evoking a visceral response from the audience on some level. If not, then we have failed. We have lost the soul of our story. Could it be because even we don’t like our characters or we’re not moved by our own story?

Has formula replaced creative storytelling in an effort to secure ROI? Many would – and do – suggest that this the case. And to a point, I agree. It would seem that we have lost our way and sold out to the demands of the studios in writing scripts that are almost guaranteed success – the sequels, the prequels, and even adaptations because the story and characters are established. In that way, the movies have become like episodes of an ongoing story or series, like television or even a book series. And while that concept is not wrong, it becomes tired and jaded when it is being pumped out just a little too often.

And so now we see a resurgence of television with the emergence of binge watching, the ability to watch up to a whole season in one sitting via the Netflix or Quikflix or any other VOD company. And with that, we have seen the quality of television programs available through this method rise dramatically in excellence – House of Cards being the prime example.

And what has made these programs so successful? It’s not just accessibility or the viewers’ ability to control how much they watch at a time. These programs are great stories. The characters are engaging and we want to know more, every episode.

So it may be said, cinema has lost the plot. And yet there are some wonderful films being made by both the indie film crowd and the studios. But most of these are not original stories. It’s like we have fallen out of love with storytelling. We have become so clever in our efforts to ensure the ROI for investors (don’t get me wrong – this is important!), we have lost our love for storytelling, engaging, fun, dramatic, adventurous, edgy, storytelling.

romancingthestory1We must find our own romance with our stories, rediscovering what drew us in to this amazing craft that enables us to create worlds and characters that we can share with others. Telling stories that expose and explore human nature and teach us a little about ourselves. Of course, to do that, the writer must also be willing to bare their soul to an audience who may not share the writer’s POV. But still, the stories must be told. That is how humankind operates. We are the only species that tells stories. So why have we lost the romance of storytelling and replaced it with scripts that are more in line with an accountant’s calculations and demographic assessments than whether an audience will be moved emotionally, stimulated mentally and even inspired to change their own world.

12 Point Guide To Creating A TV Series

Great foundational screenwriting tips on creating a TV series from Jim Sarantinos on his blog, Gideon’s Way.


Gideon's Screenwriting Tips: Now You're a Screenwriter

Carole Kirschner  gives a step by step guide to creating a TV series.


This is the overall idea of the series. e.g. Lost is about a group of people stranded on an unknown island following a plane crash. After this, explain how you came up with the idea. What was the inspiration behind it? Why does it resonate so well with you? Why do you love it so much it has to be on the screen? Why are you the best person to tell the story?


Protagonist – This is the main character who’s actions and decisions drive the season arc. Describe their backstory, drive (motivation), measures of failure and success, goal, obstacles, source of conflict. Find two adjectives to describe your protagonist.

Antagonist –  The bad guy/girl. What do they want? Why do they want to thwart the protagonist?


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Pilar Alessandra in Australia

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Fabulous news for Australian screenwriters – aspiring or professional: Pilar Alessandra will be teaching one day seminars in Sydney and Melbourne on 15 and 16 February, 2014. This is an exciting opportunity for writers to get up close and personal with someone who knows what it takes to get your script into shape for competitions and pitching – and how to do it.

If you are struggling with the logline – let alone get the first five pages done – or can’t quite get your characters right, or your dialogue is ‘on the nose’, these seminars are perfect for you. Pilar has a wonderful teaching style to match her impeccable resume, so I can only recommend you invest in yourself and your screenwriting by signing up for your place today.

Pilar’s website has all the information you need on her background, as well as access to her podcasts – a wealth of screenwriting riches.

I have the pleasure of organising her visit, so hit the link here to the Eventbrite site for more information and secure your booking.

Meanwhile, enjoy this short video from the London Screenwriter’s Festival 2012.

Crafting the Pitch with Pilar

The Value of Real Life Heroes

CameronCroweDirector_reallifeOne of the best things about writing fiction – in whatever form, is that we create a world with its own set of rules and parameters and people who live in that world. We then put our unsuspecting characters through all sorts of dramas and impossible situations after setting them goals which they probably should never achieve. And our audiences travel on the journey with them, enduring the emotional rollercoaster, danger and heartbreak that is a part of a great story. But this is the magic of fiction. Of course, we claim to make it all up, but the truth be told – it is those people around us – friends, family, neighbours or even across the other side of this ever-decreasing globe who influence and inspire us more than we often admit. Unless we say, ‘based upon the true story of’ . . . And so it should be – these really are the best stories.

However, the current glut of remakes, reboots and comic book hero adaptations, primarily by the studios, has led our audiences to think that we filmmakers have run out of ideas and that they are only worth rehashed stories with a 21st century tag to make it contemporary. Now I enjoy a good adaptation and the likes of Marvel and DC comics stories, but it seems the studios have decided that this is what makes money. There have been many articles, speeches and conferences about the state of the industry and its outdated model of both creation and distribution in recent times, so I will keep my comments minimal. The model needs to change, it’s that simple. But the dynamic of that change may well be determined by the audiences themselves. What about the real-life heroes?

I endorse Cameron Crowe’s point. In these times, more people than ever have access to the technology that allows them to make – and star in – their own movies. And get an audience. And in some cases, a sizeable budget with which to do it all, thanks to the crowdfunding platforms. I think, well go for it. Why not? The challenge then returns to the screenwriters, directors, producers and the whole gamut of fantastically creative people dedicated to their craft to conceive, carry and deliver their stories to screen to entertain our audiences. Because despite the lack of respect that the entertainment and creative worlds might endure as ‘real jobs’, the reality remains that the arts and associated industries provide essential components to any healthy society. They bring the opportunity for the soul to soar and be expressed through both artists and audience. Our emotions are given time to be explored and touched and our hearts inspired. Even a good horror flick can give you an adrenaline rush and a chance to have a laugh at our own expense as we shriek along with our fellow audience members. Just for a little while, a bunch of strangers sit together sharing an experience that no other would ever have connected these people.

Ultimately, the arts are about connection – with ourselves, with others and with the artists. And while escapism into impossible situations and miraculous escapes seems to be quite the opposite to connection, the experience of stepping into that realm for even just a short while can change someone’s perspective and maybe give them a way to cope with whatever real-life situations they may be facing.

If this can happen with the ‘possibly-might-happen-stretching-the imagination’ type of film, how much more when we create characters and stories around real life and actual events? Now there’s real connection. Nothing gets to me more when the movie is not only well-crafted, performed and produced but it has the elements of an authentic life lived encased in the story. Sure, the details may not be completely accurate, but the essence of the story is there and each person can draw from it whatever they need. Where historical fact and detail is necessary, then be true to it but otherwise, be inspired by the real life heroes and write your own story from their experiences, adding your own flavour to journey. After all, isn’t that what story-telling is all about?

We can wax lyrical about movie-making models and distribution, but no matter how it gets to our audience, let’s give them cracking stories to engage and entertain. Society, in general, seems to have become a generation of observers. I believe that cinema and media have the power to contribute to a move to stir us to participate again.

Your Value as a Screenwriter: How Much Are You Worth?

Your Value as a Screenwriter: How Much Are You Worth? | My Blank Page.

Successful screenwriter and producer Christine Conradt guest blogs for Scriptcat on the reality and the potential of life as a screenwriter. Invaluable advice.

Audience is King!

When The Sapphires was released in August, a few screenwriting friends and I made sure we saw this new gem of Australian filmmaking for ourselves. I confess – the reviews, reports and marketing campaign (not to mention the talent) held me in anticipation – albeit slightly reserved. I love musicals – film and theatre – and this film took me on a wonderful journey. The tagline captures the film’s essence: ‘Follow your heart. Discover your soul’. No – it’s not earth-shatteringly perfect, but it grabbed me by the heart strings and took me with it. The characters were engaging, the music and singing terrific and the ending was satisfying. And there’s no coincidence that soul music is so central to the story. So why was The Sapphires taken into the hearts of Australian audiences? Is it just its feel-good appeal? And why was my anticipation somewhat reserved?

Australian films have been languishing in a limbotic state in recent times, promising much but just not delivering the level of impact on audiences and critics that we experienced a few years back. That’s not to say Hollywood was in any danger of being overtaken by the Australian film industry, but hey – they rated on the Aussie audience radar. Irrespective of personal taste, movies like Crocodile Dundee, Babe and Strictly Ballroom are among 17 films earning more than $10 million at the Australian box office and all made between 1980 and 2000. Comparatively, in the last ten years, only four Australian films have earned $10 million or more (Source: Screen Australia).

Australian actors and filmmakers have long been recognised and applauded for their creativity, skill and talent. Heaven knows, there are Australians everywhere doing very well, thank you, in all filmmaking roles. Despite this fact, our homegrown films have not reached the same dizzying heights. And certainly not in the hearts of Australian audiences. But The Sapphires seems to have struck a chord with Australian and worldwide audiences alike. Red Dog had similar success and several other films such as Animal Kingdom, with Jacki Weaver‘s Oscar-nominated performance to boost it, received international recognition and critical acclaim. Notoriously difficult to please (some may argue this point!) and often harsher on our own, we Aussies just don’t warm to our films. And the tone of our stories in the last few years have been generally slow, uninspiring and some – well, downright depressing. Critical acclaim, it seems, holds little regard with the locals.

Red Dog – on location.

What to do about this situation? Indeed, some may disagree there is a ‘situation’. That’s fine – everyone is entitled to their opinion. But fact is, our people don’t rush to the box office to spend their hard-earned on a home-grown production. There is a saying in the retail sector: Customer is King! That is, to make a decent fist of a retail business, you need to find out what your customer wants and deliver it. You cannot dictate what your customer wants. Now advertising manipulates that to some degree, but nevertheless if you don’t supply, customers won’t buy. Once you’re established, you can introduce other things because your customers know you and are then more accepting of new things. Sound familiar?

Maybe we need to look at this business in a similar way: Audience is King! Look at what brings Australian audiences in and make films with that in mind. And I am not advocating ‘formula’. Nor do we stay within the confines of a couple of genres. That is not a lasting platform for success. The horror fan needs to be accommodated as much as the rom-com fan does. My point is, work out why something works and use the principles to produce great entertainment – with our audience in mind as the main reason we do what we do. The best performers are there for the audience – they respect that someone has spent money and time to watch them. They study their craft to deliver the best product they can and realise that those audience members can choose to spend their money and time elsewhere. It seems our film audiences are choosing to do exactly that. And speaking of money . . .

Millions of dollars to back a film do not, as we well know, ensure box-office success. A number of great films have been made on a miniscule budget, and some mega-dollar flops have sent studios packing. But, we need some money to make films. Funding opportunities through the established organisations in the lucky country are difficult and tightly-contested at best. And while the same sort of scripts get funded, we face a continuing cycle of people writing to a style that gets money for development with no real return at the box office. Make no mistake – filmmaking is as much business as it is art. I want to pay the people who work on my films – not ask them to wait until we start to get a return. But if the public are not paying to see films, then it all becomes an almost narcissistic activity.

Again, what to do? We must change the status quo. Sounds easy, right? No – not at all. But I believe it can be achieved. We have a vibrant, creative filmmaking community that is just itching to develop quality entertainment. Being force-fed the current free-to-air television slush has not helped promote the cause of great writing and production. I wonder if the public have been duped into believing this is the best we can offer and so our films are just the same. Sure, we have had some recent television series that have been solid and eminently watchable, but definitely no Breaking Bad, Smash, Boardwalk Empire, or Downton Abbey types have broached our screens. It’s not for lack of good writers, directors, producers, cinematographers, actors – in fact any role. If we have money for the likes of the now defunct (cough) The Shire, we have money for more of the quality of House Husbands and Rake. And I am convinced that the size of the screen does not matter where good entertainment is concerned.

I attended this year’s SPAA Fringe Conference, held 26-27 October, on Sydney’s Cockatoo Island, alongside the Cockatoo Island Film Festival, 24-28 October. The island was buzzing with film fans, actors, directors, producers and emerging television and filmmakers of all types. Those attending SPAA Fringe heard about the latest in crowdfunding, crowdsourcing and crowd-investing, grants, government funding, multi-platform producing, web-series, and the list is way too long for this post. The incredible diversity and creativity amongst our local screen community was evident and there were many more amazingly talented filmmakers who could not attend.

We can start somewhere to make an impact and bring more of that fresh breeze that is stirring in this business. I believe the future of the industry is in good hands – provided we keep our audience on the top of our priority list and earn their respect once again. Then we’ll see bums on seats and the box office ticking over, so we can do what? Make more great films!